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Trigger Part 2
16-09-2008, 06:50 PM
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Trigger Part 2
Ok, guys, i dont think this is as good as the previous trigger. It's more like a bridge between scenes. i can't have a huge gunfight in every episode, right? Hope you enjoy it.

“What the hell is wrong with you?” Jonathan screamed, “I lost my best man on this mission, all you have to say is how fucking ‘unfortunate it is’, and now, you’re not letting me go to his funeral because you’re sending me to fucking Peru!”
He was in his commander’s office, having just gotten back with the amulet.
“The least you could do is tell me what you want with this freaking amulet? What is it, magical? Tell me!”
“Alright, Lieutenant, calm down. That amulet contains a very rare, and very potent chemical. We would like it for research.” Commander Jackson said coolly.
“Fucking chemicals? You didn’t know James at all, did you? He was a great man. So then, what is so urgent that I have to miss my best friend’s funeral? More fucking chemicals? As if there’s even enough in the amulet to do anything useful.”
“No. We have a kidnapping in Peru, a very important scientist, by the name of Khalif. We need you to rescue him.”
“Why me? Why not let Peru handle – ”
“He’s an Australian scientist, despite the name. You’re one of our best operatives, Lieutenant, and you have no idea how dire the situation is.”
“Well then, why not get your best freaking operative?” Jonathan lost it. He had loved James like a brother ever since they met at ASAS training. He stood and drew a combat knife, and lunged at Jackson. Wrong move. Jackson grabbed his wrist and flicked the knife out of his hand with ease.
“Look, Michaels, either you cooperate, or we make you cooperate, understand?”

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16-09-2008, 07:12 PM (This post was last modified: 16-09-2008 07:12 PM by Max.)
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RE: Trigger Part 2
You should put the whole series into one thread and update the title when you post additions.

Will make it more easy to read Smile

And great job btw Tongue

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16-09-2008, 08:24 PM
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tyvm good idea

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19-07-2010, 11:15 AM (This post was last modified: 19-07-2010 11:20 AM by (alex).)
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RE: Trigger Part 2
haah good point.
although not so much now as i did back in like year 8 or whenever when i wrote this

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19-07-2010, 01:24 PM
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Can you write more stories with senseless violence?
I think they are most marvellous!

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19-07-2010, 08:55 PM
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haha ily max. maybe i will

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20-07-2010, 07:58 AM
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Awesome work Alex
Amazingly good story Biggrin

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21-07-2010, 10:15 AM
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(19-07-2010 01:24 PM)Max Wrote:  Can you write more stories with senseless violence?
I think they are most marvellous!

Use the chan as your inspiration Smile

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